General Poetry posted July 13, 2019


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sand pebbles twerk and twist

winds cause unique dance moves

by Mark D. R.

The author has placed a warning on this post for language.
By offshore breezes,
the atoll's sands twerk and twist
as hula dancers.



5-7-5 Poem contest entry


Thanks again (!) to cleo85 for illustration.

Some may object to the use of 'twerk.' 'Turn' may have been substituted, but then the 'tw' alliteration would have been missed.
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Artwork by cleo85 at FanArtReview.com

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