General Poetry posted July 4, 2019


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Aussie road trip poem for today

Wide brown land

by Chrissy710

So dry and dusty makes me sad
to see the land in real despair,
big brown paddocks, sunburnt plains
this wide brown land need much repair.

No blades of grass, a dust bowl far
the trees they struggle to survive
no colour 'cept shades of brown
a big rain needed to revive.

Outback Australia tells this tale
in somber silence shows its hand
no signs of life amongst this dust
miles and miles of barren land.

A sign I pass its message reads
'Farming's not a way of life
it just keeps everyone alive'
I wonder how amongst this strife?

Christine 4/7/2019


 



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Hi day 4 of our Aussie road trip and
Travelling from Coonamble NSW to Lightning Ridge really highlighted to me the effects of the drought here in outback Australia. Miles and miles of dry dusty colourless paddocks no sign of life anywhere and then We passed the sign ( lines 14 and 15 ) and It made me wonder how the farmers survive amongst this desolate land.
Many do not and fall victim to suicide or just walk off their properties and I can see why.

This poem made me thankful to live in Victoria although dry at times never like what I saw today so I thought I would share this one today

I have used an image again from FS art as I am still having difficulty putting my own images onto my poems it seems just random images I have use in the past just attache to my work so unforunately I cant use the one I took to show how dry Australia countryside is
I will change this image if I find a way but in the meantime I thank cakemp55 for a lend of this image used 'rural lanscape'

I hope my words say more than the image anyway

Opal mines tomorrow so should be a much lighter note

Thanks for reading my work

Cheers Christine
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Artwork by cakemp55 at FanArtReview.com

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