Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted June 22, 2019 | Chapters: | ...24 25 -26- 27... |
free verse with in and out rhymes
A chapter in the book Fragmentation
Machines
by estory
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In this poem I wanted a mechanical style, a mechanical rhythm, and I thought the use of rhyme here, which I normally don't use often, would serve to deepen that sense of rhythm. This is told in a hollow, toneless voice, a mechanical, artificial voice, matter of fact, to underscore the machine like atmosphere. I'm a big skeptic of technology, and where it is taking mankind. Life is more convenient with machines, easier, but less satisfying. What makes life satisfying is the effort we expend to reach our goals. There is something empty, soulless, about the automated, computerized, mechanized world. It is no good. estory
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