Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted June 6, 2019


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A Triquatrain

Anti-Umbrellas

by damommy

 

Caught in the rain, I do disdain
the use of bumbershoots.
Along with that, I wear no hat
or shiny knee-high boots.
 
I feel alive and even thrive
when rain falls on my head.
I’ve left behind, yes, have declined,
the shelter of a shed.
 
I’ve been entranced and sometimes danced
in showers from the sky,
and felt the love from up above;
I can’t explain just why.
 
It feels so cozy as I mosey
from my humble nest,
while an umbrella, my dear fella,
spoils what I like best.
 
I will not yield to use that shield
against the drizzly mist,
for then I’d miss the best of all --
the drops the angels kissed.
 



Recognized

#804
2019


A Triquatrain Poem - created by Robert L. Huntsman. It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2 and 4 do not.

"Bumbershoot" is a predominantly American nickname, one that has been recorded as a whimsical, slightly irreverent handle for umbrellas since the late 1890s. As with most slang terms, the origins of "bumbershoot" are a bit foggy, but it appears that the "bumber" is a modification of the "umbr-" in "umbrella" and the "shoot" is an alteration of the "-chute" in "parachute" (since an open parachute looks a little like an umbrella).

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