Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 21, 2019


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Sonnet, rhymed 10-syllable lines

This Thing About Religion

by sunnilicious



Do you hold strong faith in divine powers?
There are many religions to practice.
We grow, learn and hold on to what is ours;
Some beliefs change us into fanatics.

Religion is an organization;
It leads us to function in completeness,
To live freedoms with unification
As we do our rituals with sweetness.

But we become a group of followers,
And we are content having a purpose
With a leader never to disavow
As words drip like honey into verses.

We turn to God wholeheartedly for love
With a mighty messenger to guide us.

 
Angel Praying




As everybody knows I embrace all people and religions, however, I am labeled as a Muslim. I attempted to write in Iambic pentameter, however, not sure if I was successful because of the big words. Thinking simple words to syllable stress on finger counts aren't as simple as some may think. I wrote religion in general versus focused on one sacred and secular belief. There are too many ideologies even if they are broken into 5 mojor religious groups. And all not being monotheistic drives me into many different paths to understand. So forgive me if writing religion at a macro-level offends you. There were no ill intentions of that. God bless you, (even those with agnostics and atheist beliefs).


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