General Poetry posted May 15, 2019


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we should pray for one another always

Day Poetry Saving Souls

by giovannimariatommaso

it is truly a surprise
that there seems no one
to review my poem
because I assume


of the fear that they see in it
themselves so clearly
have I gone too far
have I not gone far enough


is the rim of the edge of pain
the alarm & panic of destruction
is it really that close
& is there an honest retribution


we often hear it said
that the truth hurts
& it is explained away that
we just simply don't want to hear it


I definitely differ on that score
the truth doesn't hurt it's the gestalt
that it causes to gyrate into an
awakening that is what seems to prick


the ego inflating-balloon of pride
yes this resistance this protest this
well you see that the truth cleanses & allows
the oozing of the puss of pride to air & to dry-out






Which one of us can clearly see ourselves in the midst of a spiritual wrong unless they are assisted by the ancient traditions that have been written down in poetical form for our enlightenment?

& is not what we wish to give as gift of our experiences in the written form of poetics literally &/or virtually that same knowledge learned?
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