General Poetry posted April 22, 2019 Chapters:  ...20 21 -22- 23... 


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A Rhymed Whitney

A chapter in the book NaPoWriMo 2019

Calm Before The Storm

by Debra White



Happy snap
of smiling kids,
just before
they hit the skids.
Ben fell first,
followed by Bex - 
I won't share what happened next!


 



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Nobody got hurt, but let's just say that our lovely day out ended there and then. Fortunately, we'd already enjoyed the ice-cream part!

A Whitney is a seven line poem with a syllable count of 3/4/3/4/3/4/7 respectively.
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