General Poetry posted April 14, 2019


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everything paused

a moment of death

by Bichon

i held you tightly
as your last breath struggled
to become acquainted with the air

your bright eyes became dull,
while soft clouds made their dreaded appearance.
i was gazing into a gloomy day

tears fell from my solemn face
but before i could clear my vision,
you were gone,
and the chaos surrounding me returned.



I have recently begun watching game of thrones, and one of the characters death hit me harder than some others, and it inspired me to write this poem.

gif is from game of thrones, all rights go to them.
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