General Poetry posted March 19, 2019


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A 5-3-5 poem

Big Paw

by tempeste

come on! give me five
said the king
while licking his chops.


Write a Lune writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a Lune. A Lune is a condensed haiku. It has 5-3-5 syllables.


The poem is inspired by an Italian saying :

fidarsi e ' bene ma non fidarsi e ' meglio
which means :

to trust is good but to not trust is better..(I don't think there is such a saying in English )

The title is not much but I ran out of ideas ...and the deadline was around the corner.
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