Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 14, 2019 Chapters:  ...67 68 -69- 70... 


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Dandizette style

A chapter in the book Love of Animals

Tree of Life

by Bucketlist

The tree of life grows big and strong
In Nature's creation
Donated life's where we belong
Roots shared by every nation
Evolution's been long
An interesting condition

Growing has a similar style
Many diverse results
Some people are in active denial
About how it ever got started
Observe God's gifts a while
Everything that's been granted

In Nature's creation
Evolution's been long
Many diverse results
Observe God's gifts a while
Needs must be met for survival
Rules can be found in the Bible









Dandizette--a style with rules as follows:
3 six line stanzas
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the form is partially inspired by the villanelle, and
features a TRICKY repetition of FOUR refrain lines
in the FINAL stanza.

The syllazble count for the FIRST TWO stanzas is 8/6/8/8/6/8.
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The LAST STANZA has lines of
6/6/6/6/8/8 syllables.
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The RHYME SCHEME (ababcbcbcdcdbcbcee)
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IMPORTANT:
The final stanza is composed of lines 2, 5, 8, 11 from the PREVIOUS TWO stanzas, PLUS a concluding RHYMING COUPLET.
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Where they reappear in the last stanza, the FOUR REPEATED LINES NEED TO MAKE SENSE together as well as MAKING SENSE WHERE FIRST USED
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METER IS OPTIONAL.
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For author notes, I suggest just the basic rules about the rhyme scheme, the layout of stanzas and that meter is optional (No one really reads the example poem, right?).
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SUGGESTION:
Write your final stanza first then start with the first one. Hopefully
this will help to make sure that the last stanza makes sense
(c) Lawrencealot



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