General Poetry posted March 4, 2019


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A cinquan

One day

by Chrissy710

I take
her hand in mine
and guide her down the street.
Will my daughter take my hand too
one day?



Cinquan Poetry contest entry

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My mother is frail at times and need a guiding hand now to cross the street or walk along a crowded footpath. I wonder if one day my daughter will also take my hand

Thanks for reading my poem

Thanks to Anne for the lovely image ' hands'

Cheers Christine
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