General Poetry posted February 24, 2019


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the sparrow

Renewal

by victortouche

Can you take
these tears
from my eyes?

Gather up
the whys
and cart them all away?

Would you be judge?
Just a little nudge,
and then...

See,
what you could have been?

Make me a sparrow.
Just a little one.

I could start to fly,
and feel that sky begin.
This time, real time.

Days gone by,
I just can't cry
a beginning.

What if we all could just...
innocence, and grin,
and fly again?



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#1773
2019


The right side.
The magic side.
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