General Poetry posted February 20, 2019


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a 3,5,2 poem by lulube

People

by Lulube



Real people
That's who you should be
around
Those who's names you can
respect
Everyone likes them
in town

Honest people
White glow surrounds their
body
Speak words that you can
count on
Firm hand shake's enough
for me

Supportive people
Their cell's always on
to call
Will listen, then give
advice
They'll pick you up when
you fall

Beautiful people
Brighten up a sad
blue day
Their laughter heals us
inside
World needs more like them
I say






if you noticed or not, each verse increases a syllable in the first line; so it's 3.4.5.6 then followed by 5.2.5.2.5.2 the rhyme is (including first line) abcdefc I call it;
3.5.2 poem try one!!!
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