Children Fiction posted January 17, 2019


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I didn't have too many of these moments, too shy.

The Moment

by papa55mike


“Oh, no!”

Alicia is impatiently waiting by the bus door, chewing her gum. “Here's your stupid ring back, I'm going with Stevie now.” She slams it in my hand then struts away.

My heart shatters, until a sweet voice says, “Hi, Jaydon, can I sit beside you?”

“Sure,” ego, reinflated.




Dribble Flash Fiction contest entry


50 words. The picture is some wonderful friends in the cafeteria at lunch.

Many thanks for stopping by to read!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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