General Poetry posted January 13, 2019


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In The Heart

by dragonpoet

Castles are often constructed here
Dreamers done ever fear
And discouragement you never hear
Wishes are always clear
In the heart

The mind creates pathways to follow
No idea's hollow
Thoughts of derailment faithful swallows
Doubt seeks not to wallow
In the heart

Strength, hope and destiny are oft bound
As one they go to ground
Though many feelings go round and round
Prayers answers are found
In the heart

All freedoms are not easily won
In time all can be done
All negatives man will one day shun
If the light of the Son's
in the heart


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This potlatch is a Cole's Poem. It is made up of four or more five line stanzas
Syllable count is 9 6 9 6 3
aaaaR bbbbR ccccR ddddR ets.
R is a repeating phrase
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