General Poetry posted December 31, 2018


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A Tanka poem

Tanka(grandson paints)

by Pamusart

grandson paints
sunset, hills and road
grandma does
barren tree and sun
a fam'ly affair.



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I am so proud of my youngest grandchild. He is better than I am at completing areas of his paintings. I thought he did quite well.

Thank you for reading our poem

Painting by my grandson and me. Titled Sunset Road by Italo Oil on canvas.


I was taken by surprise to see that he is even better than I am to paint between the lines.

Maybe I will pay him and hire him. Lol.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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