General Poetry posted December 15, 2018


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Rhyming Acrostic

by kahpot

Rhyming Acrostic, I've traveled to hell
Hell that I'll raise with this muted yell
Yell for a muse to enter my mind
Mind that has doubt and not so inclined
Inclined to produce words that navigate
Navigate my thoughts till they become great
Great is the answer while the question's afloat

Afloat but drifting from mind's doubtful cloak
Cloak now revealing it's time to redeem
Redeem and divert from predicted onslaught
Onslaught now cloaked, by my muses support
Support that empowered, my rise to the top
Top of my mountain, now life is idyllic
Idyllic to me, though I'd fall for my critic
Critic who surrenders to my rhyming acrostic


Acrostic Poetry Contest contest entry

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Never written a rhyming acrostic, but I am trying for a fellow Fanstorian who relayed that acrostic rhyme was a preference, so I used this as my muse, challenge, and critic, all rolled into one.
It was a very enjoyable and fun write, hope you enjoy, oh and for my muse, I incorporated a Loop for extra fun
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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