General Poetry posted November 7, 2018


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We Fell In Love Instantly

Our Eyes Spoke

by tbacha58

"Our Eyes Spoke"

When we first met at the hotel lobby
for recollection of work accompanying us
the sounds of fourth of July
our ceaseless conversations felt flawless
immediately a faultless intimate sharing
took over a mixture of work and pleasure

Battling every day is so hard
to maintain a healthy mind
to keep up with our everyday work
our thoughtful speculations
of wanting the impossible to take place
has to change by gaining self confidence
and becoming independent

We found our loving natures
coincided with the authentic sounds
of fireworks plus its music filling
the sky with a huge combination
of the most beautiful fireworks
in Technicolor

The sounds and musical lights
combined together
allowed our eyes to sparkle more than ever
both of us fell in to a pensive dreamy mood
for a rightful discussion about how love
can start by romancing to evolve later
into a durable long- lived relationship

You were so much my type of man
smiling drinking and eating
with our discussions constantly
allowing us to remain in high spirits
an artist at work very authentic fancy
& had an unforgettable
sense of humor

Behind us the sky illuminated
our joy of being together
that delightful lasting closeness
felt like a challenge awaiting
for the unpredictable to happen
the tremendous sounds of fireworks
accompanied with a charming tempo
ringing in our thoughts

Instantly our touching hands
felt permissive stimulated devoted
his voice transformed into an echo
inviting me to go up to his room later
to heat the bed with passion
cooling off our desires
you have asked me before
about what color of roses I love
Yellow

Later on hand in hand
once inside the room
it was filled with yellow roses
everywhere and layered on the
beautiful bed
Suddenly you threw my hand bag aside
and held me so tightly
to waltz to the sounds of music
There was a telepathy between us
and the sounds rang in our ears
as a sweet mixture of music
Immediately you took my hand kissed it
with your warmest lips
begging to love me tonight

Our body connection was authentic
flirting as a start was conceived
in an artistic way kissing- wise
and making love was memorable
when I gave away my body
the most precious part of my existence
because I felt it's true love
Slowly the sounds ended while gradually
our naked bodies parted in the morning
when our routine for work
had to take place

We parted with a long sensual kiss
emancipating another candle-lit night.
It happened forty five years ago
our endless love
up till this day

22 Oct. 2018



It happened and they stayed together up till today. 45 years in love.
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