Romance Poetry posted November 7, 2018

This work has reached the exceptional level
We Fell In Love Instantly

The Hotel Lobby

by tbacha58

"Our Eyes Spoke"

When we first met at the hotel lobby
for recollection of work,
accompanying us
the sounds of Fourth of July.
Our ceaseless conversations felt flawless,
immediately a faultless intimate sharing
took over,
a mixture of work and pleasure.

Battling every day is so hard to maintain a healthy mind,
to keep up with our everyday work.
Our thoughtful speculations of wanting the impossible to take place,
has to change, by gaining self-confidence
and becoming independent.

We found our loving natures
coincided with the authentic sounds
of fireworks, plus its music filling
the sky with a tremendous combination
of the most beautiful fireworks
in Technicolor.

The sounds and musical lights
combined allowed our eyes to sparkle more than ever,
both of us fell into a dreamy mood
for a rightful discussion about how love
can start by romancing,
to evolve later
into a durable, long-lived relationship.

You were so much my type of man,
smiling, drinking, and eating,
with our discussions constantly
allowing us to remain in high spirits,
an artist at work, very authentic, fancy,
& had an unforgettable
the sense of humor.

Behind us the sky illuminated
our joy of being together,
that delightful lasting closeness
felt like a challenge awaiting
for the unpredictable to happen.
The tremendous sounds of fireworks
accompanied by a charming tempo
ringing in our thoughts.

Instantly our touching hands
felt permissive, stimulated, devoted,
his voice transformed into an echo
inviting me to go up to his room later
to heat the bed with passion,
cooling off our desires.
You have asked me before
about what color of roses I love,
Yellow they are.

Later on hand in hand once inside the room
filled with yellow roses everywhere,
and layered on the beautiful bed.
Suddenly you threw my handbag aside,
and held me so tightly
to waltz to the sounds of music.

There was telepathy between us,
and the sounds rang in our ears
as a sweet mixture of music.
Immediately you took my hand kissed it
with your warmest lips,
begging to love me tonight

Our body connection was authentic,
flirting as a start,
was conceived
in an artistic way by kissing
and making love was memorable,
when I gave away my body
the most precious part of my existence
because I felt it's true love.

Slowly the sounds ended
while gradually
our naked bodies parted in the morning,
our routine for work
I had to take place.

We parted with a long sensual kiss
emancipating another candle-lit night.
It happened since forty-five years our endless love,
up till this day.

January 16, 2019


It happened and they stayed together up till today. 45 years in love.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by Neilnap773 at

Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.

© Copyright 2019. tbacha58 All rights reserved.
tbacha58 has granted, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.