Horror and Thriller Fiction posted October 29, 2018


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There will be no remorse for Ted, he had it coming.

Do Unto Others

by oorwull

The car raced along the coastal highway.

The woman in the passenger seat was dead. Strangled!

Ted knew exactly how to get rid of her body. He had it all figured out.

He slowed, and pulled on to the shoulder beside the barrier that ran along the
edge of the cliff.

Climbing out of the car, he walked around to the passenger side. Then checked the
road both ways, before opening the door.

Dragging her to the low barrier, he draped her head and shoulders over the edge,
picked up her legs, and heaved. She fell all the way to the water.

Months passed, then he found a new girlfriend.

She was driving the Jaguar along the coastal highway. That same highway Ted
remembered so well.

Suddenly, the car lost power. She pulled over to the shoulder.

Ted knew instantly! He whirled to her, just as the gun went off!


Flash Fiction contest entry


Wrote this one many years ago, but never published. Cut and polished to fit the competition.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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