General Poetry posted October 22, 2018


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tanka poem

tomorrow

by judester

The Life He Almost Lived Contest Winner 
The life he wanted
slipped through the fingers of time.
Always tomorrow.
Alone he died on the streets,
tomorrow has come and gone.

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Writing Prompt
Many people talk about what they wanted to do with their lives... what they should have done, the lives they almost lived. Write a poem that captures this.
The Life He Almost Lived
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