General Poetry posted September 3, 2018


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on the sadness of leaving life behind

The rear view mirror

by Mark Valentine

Objects in the rear view mirror,
as time goes by come to appear
so small.
‘Til one day they just can’t be seen at all.

You travel and one day you find,
your life lies in the miles behind
the now.
You keep on driving though you’re not sure how.

And as the road ahead unfolds,
you find that it no promise holds
for you.
You recognize your journey’s nearly through.

The sad thing is you can’t go back,
each milepost past creates another lack
in life.
You lose your parents, then you lose your wife.

One sorrow holds no counterpart:
To see that everything your heart
held dear,
fade fast to nothing in the rear view mirror.



Sad Poems writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Sadness has overcome us all at one time or another. Either caused by a relative or close friend's death or from the girl or guy that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Your poem can also play into other emotions that are common to writing like this such as anger or depression.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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