General Fiction posted August 14, 2018


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Forever War

by zanya


Emily scrolled through her Facebook page. Her dad, Peter, by the telly, watched the commemoration for the guys at Amiens a hundred years ago.

"Just think, Emily," he said, "without brave men like grandad, we wouldn't have our freedom ."

Emily rolled her twenty-something eyes.

She glanced at boyfriend Jamie's page. Dressed in army fatigues, he was off to join the British Army.

"Never," Emily exclaimed, surprised. "No, it can't be," she sobbed, "isn't war just for old fogies?"

 



Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a complete story in 80 words or less.

The theme is 'Surprise.'

You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic.


79 words without the title.
Battle of Amiens/France, Aug 8th 1918, ultimately led to end of WW1.
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