General Poetry posted June 4, 2018


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Dick Van Dyke, but my roof

A Time To Step

by victortouche

Jim jiminee
Jim jiminee
Jim jim jaroo

I dance in a style
I felt long 'fore you

I dance not when called
I dance when I do

A pot
A cauldron
And merriment too

All boiled to candles
I carry for you

Fields yield incense
and incepts
and that begat you

Just
to be stirred in
the great Milieu

Jim jiminee
Damn mountain
I stare at it there

I will not go 'round

Ah, man...never learns

She looks
and she laughs
at the hill
in her path

"Come," she says

Takes infirmity
my hand
my... indomitable ignorance

"The rain is coming,
this too shall wash away."

She smiles at me
as I begin to melt



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Naturally, I have used the iconic lines
spoken by Dick Van Dyke in the immortal...
"Mary Poppins."
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