General Poetry posted May 28, 2018


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We all have our issues

Die

by F Scott Hafner

[E]
Die
[E Bb E]
Think of Her
[E Bb B E]
You, worthless piece of
[E Bb E E Bb B]
She, goddess of destiny

Chorus
[E A D]
Love is blind, but you can see
[G C F]
Death upon your useless plight
[Bb Eb Ab]
To arms cry but dark
[Db Gb B]
Burden here dims all you wish

E...
Rise

She beckons

Helpless to the fight

The ride, music screams to fly


Down

Free to death

And pain weds your soul

Deep inside putrid lips smile


Her

Thoughts be lore

Mine to rot in truth

The devil's match in hell




This is a heavy metal song with suggested chords. The chords are as important as the words although they do not align with words as they do in edit mode. They might work in theory but...

It points out how struggles may be overpowering at times and music can provide some respite however brief. To recognize a problem is the first step. Metal seems to dig deep into emotional challenges. While not obvious to most, the virtuosity of metal musicians is amazing.
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