Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 22, 2018

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a look at our life

observation 3

by Phillip C Kuhn

I was molded from concrete
A true product of the blood-soaked streets
I was born during an era where hero's fail to meet expectations
and winners only know defeat,
The new generations are the result of backwards evolution
They speak a defected language
Comprised of complaints
unintelligible nonsense and perfected accusations,
This planet is under a bloodthirsty enchantment
with its land torn by war & ran by leaders who love getting their hands dirty
only to blame it on a false controversy leaving their people abandoned,
flags are burning
we're in a panic
kids attending school are being used as target practice
parents are frantic,
Freedom doesn't come cheap
To the everyday man who gets his daily dose of bleakness for free,
Open your eyes and realize there's nothing to see.


every now and then I will right down an observation piece depending on whats happening around me and in the world, enjoy.

the image is one of my paintings
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