General Poetry posted May 14, 2018


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A Tableau

One Soldier Tableau

by damommy


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Soldier stands aside,
commanded to watch.
Likes not what he sees -
the crucifixion
of the One Who came
to save us from sin.
 
The heavens turn black;
temple splits in two;
bodies rise from tombs,
appear in city.
Soldier understands
what he has witnessed.
 



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This was a challenge I missed in the Potlatch Poetry Club. I hope it's done correctly.

The Tableau, a poetry form created by Emily Romano in October of 2008, consists of one or more verses, each having six lines. Each line should have five beats. There is no set rhyme scheme, although rhyme may be present. The title should contain the word tableau.

Since the dictionary states the word tableau means picture or representation, the poem should reflect this. A picture should come to mind as the poem is read.
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