General Poetry posted April 28, 2018


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My rap about life with my ex husband

Ode to my ex

by Blue Hendrix

Replace me.
Deface me.
You'll never erase me.

As you will see
my memory
is burned in your mind
like a tragedy.

On and on
On and on
Forever I will be.

The first thought
And the last thought
of every day you see.

Cuz I was
too good
too hood
too true
to everyone but me.

Now you're lost
but I am found.
I am up.
but you are down.

Down low
like a little hoe
so your real Soul can show.
I flow so everyone knows.

The truth about
who you really are
No job, no check, no car.

Waiting on me to provide the green
while you sit on your ass
being shady and mean.

Mean and nasty,
but I will Outlast ya.
I will win this fight in the end.

Cuz you're a loser,
a leaver,
a no promises keeper.

And I am a winner.
A new beginner,
and I am the one
you'll be missing forever.

You thought you were clever
but I pulled the lever
AND NOW YOU ARE DONE!


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