General Fiction posted March 12, 2018


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
75 word flash fiction...

Stealth

by frogbook


He waited, breath held, in the confining area. Chest crushed by the tight space, his legs pretzeled in the darkness, he watched. The thing was so light on its feet, he wouldn't know if it passed unless he could see it.

Suddenly, there it was. It passed by without seeing him. A ragged sigh of relief escaped.

He had the drop on it now and he nearly chuckled setting his trap.

God, he hated mice.




75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry

Recognized
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2018. frogbook All rights reserved.
frogbook has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.