General Poetry posted January 29, 2018

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Buzzzzzzzzz! What A Mess!

More Than Plenty Honeybees.

by rhonnie69

Last summer my parents and I went on a picnic.
A funny thing happened that day, that made my parents sick, quick.

Dad left our picnic basket, sitting in the grass.
Then headed for a distant stream, to try and catch some bass.

Mom was in our tent house, resting her eyes.
Without a doubt, we were about, to have a big surprise.

Beneath a jumbo sandwich, of ham, cheese, and rye,
Were more than plenty honeybees, feasting on honey pie.

When the lid was opened, the bees began to buzz.
Mom and Dad did not agree.......


What A Mess! writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a mess! As long as your poem is about making a mess, or encorporates the topic of messes, anything goes. Creative approaches are welcomed. Contest voters will be asked to consider the topic when making a choice for a winner. Now let's get sloppy!

Honey pie, honey bun, picnics can be tons of fun. Hee Hee....
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