General Fiction posted December 26, 2017

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Wish away...


by Maria Jose Garcia

George wished he had been born to a cleaner family. His parents never tidied their home and his brothers and sisters were always filthy.

George was only happy when he visited his friend Luke. Luke's home was immaculate.

'I wish my family were like yours.'

'Well, being clean and tidy is not always fun. My mum is obsessed. Everything needs to be spotless.'

'Just what I love. I have an idea. Why don't we switch families for a while?'

And that's what they did... George the Pig had the time of his life, but Luke The Cat realized living in a pigsty wasn't that great...


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