General Poetry posted November 12, 2017

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tanka contest

tanka (red roses)

by Val Crisson

red roses
wilt in a vase
she rests quietly
on a hospital bed

Tanka writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write about something lost. Something intangible.

As not many Fanstory people do not write tanka, I will once again explain the proper way to title a tanka . tanka (and the first line of the tanka). Proper tanka should be the first two lines should be about nature, then there is a pivot line which should lead into human emotion.
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