Humor Poetry posted November 9, 2017


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Relief

by Bucketlist

I had a bad backache so I went to get help
As soon as doc touched me I gave a big yelp

"Hmmm" he said, "In order to be pain free
Go hang upside down in a really big tree

Leave gravity's pull, zero gravity's the way
For at least 10 minutes every day

So this is me taking my doctor's advice
His visit, no charge, thought this was nice

The moral of this story~ don't pander to pain
Come and see doc when I do go again

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