General Poetry posted October 24, 2017 |
4/7/6 haiku
seagulls circle
by Gypsy Blue Rose
seagulls circle
above old Amtrak station-- destination unknown |
Recognized |
This haiku is based on an observation I made from my living room window. The syllable count is 17 syllables and it doesn't have to be 5/7/5. English syllables are different than Japanese syllables so the rule doesn't apply. It just has to be 17 syllables or less.
The kigo is summer (source: http://www.ahapoetry.com/aadoh/suanim.htm)
Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. The kigo is summer (source: http://www.ahapoetry.com/aadoh/suanim.htm)
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