Spiritual Flash Fiction posted October 16, 2017

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Death-bed scene

Swing Low

by StanNJ

Pop-Pop puzzled his loved ones who were gathered around his bed, when, wide-eyed, he reached up and groped feebly at the air. Grief struck them all when his arms fell, lifeless.

The two angels who had just appeared to him carried the departed soul of the Patriarch to Paradise.

Dribble Flash Fiction contest entry


Idea taken from the story of Lazarus the beggar of Luke's Gospel, and from how a friend's father looked just before dying.
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Artwork by Donny murphy at FanArtReview.com

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