Self Improvement Poetry posted October 5, 2017


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Help them find hope

by kahpot

help they need for them to find
find a future with promise of hope
hope and freedom that continues for
for daughters and sons our only heirs
heirs to a world in need of a future
future of hope and lasting help



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Still trying different styles, a" loop" with two six-word poems, the first word of every line downwards, and the last word of every line downwards, nearly the same but not, and all contained in the loop poem, started as a loop but just grew, I'm open for all help and criticism****kahpot
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