Commentary and Philosophy Non-Fiction posted July 24, 2017 |
Senses Over Time
Senses
by bhogg
One day, I was moved by a sunset over Mobile Bay. While beautiful, the sight sense transported me back over time and space.
In the 1960's, I lived in Colorado Springs, Colorado. Our picture window toward Pikes Peak. At sunset, Mom and I stood at the window. Not Dad, Brothers or Sister, just us. As the sun set, the angles of the mountain were etched against a darkening sky. As the sun disappeared, the light exploded in seconds of glory.
We held hands. Certainly not cool for a thirteen-year-old boy. A special moment for me. On a scale, one-hundred.
A hundred word story writing prompt entry
One day, I was moved by a sunset over Mobile Bay. While beautiful, the sight sense transported me back over time and space.
In the 1960's, I lived in Colorado Springs, Colorado. Our picture window toward Pikes Peak. At sunset, Mom and I stood at the window. Not Dad, Brothers or Sister, just us. As the sun set, the angles of the mountain were etched against a darkening sky. As the sun disappeared, the light exploded in seconds of glory.
We held hands. Certainly not cool for a thirteen-year-old boy. A special moment for me. On a scale, one-hundred.
In the 1960's, I lived in Colorado Springs, Colorado. Our picture window toward Pikes Peak. At sunset, Mom and I stood at the window. Not Dad, Brothers or Sister, just us. As the sun set, the angles of the mountain were etched against a darkening sky. As the sun disappeared, the light exploded in seconds of glory.
We held hands. Certainly not cool for a thirteen-year-old boy. A special moment for me. On a scale, one-hundred.
Writing Prompt Write a hundred words story which starts with : First word : One Last word : hundred So you only have 98 words to frame a story. |
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