General Poetry posted July 20, 2017 Chapters:  ...33 34 -35- 36... 


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...a Quatraine

A chapter in the book My Book of Poems 2010-2017

The Pain in my Eye

by Mustang Patty

Painful stye in my left eye,
Such a tender little spot
Looking like just a red dot
I can't help but wonder why

 
Why is it so darn painful?
What caused this calamity?
Want to use profanity
But that won't be too helpful
 
With dimmed light in ev'ry room,
There's no place to really read,
Reviewing is what I need,
Member dollars need to 'shroom
 
FanStory life is such a drag
No time to be weak or sick
Rankings will sink like a brick
When your stories start to lag



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just fooling around with words

A Quatrain is a poem consisting of four lines of verse with a specific rhyming scheme.

A few examples of a quatrain rhyming scheme are as follows:
1. abab
2. abba; known as an envelope rhyme
3. aabb
4. aaba, bbcb, ccdc, dddd; known as a chain rhyme
I chose to write an envelope rhyme with seven syllables per line
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