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haiku suite

A chapter in the book 2017 JAPANESE POETRY

River Walk

by Gypsy Blue Rose





tree shaped like a ‘g’
shimmers in the morning sun—

river passes by
 
 
morning’s river walk
in peaceful bliss among baby boomers
 
 
nature's passion
written over neon red rose­­—
cool breeze caresses
 



 



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During my morning walk by the river, I stopped for a while and sat on a bench. These haiku came to mind while I watched the water go by.

Haiku suite is two or more haiku and a Japanese poetic form. A common form is 17 syllables in a 5/7/5 format but due to the language difference in English is perfectly alright to write it in less than 17 syllables. It's also alright to write in one or two lines.

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