General Poetry posted May 3, 2017 Chapters:  ...23 24 -25- 26... 


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summer haiku

A chapter in the book 2017 JAPANESE POETRY

haiku (outside in the heat)

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
outside in the heat,

pale tree inhales traffic fumes—

asphyxiated





 



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