General Poetry posted May 2, 2017 Chapters:  ...27 28 -29- 30... 


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a shasei senryu (observation)

A chapter in the book 2017 JAPANESE POETRY

senryu (minuscule)

by Gypsy Blue Rose




minuscule

but essential sentient beings

in Mother’s hands



 



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This is the way I feel when I go to the ocean.

Mother= Mother Nature
minuscule=very small
sentient=all living conscious things, people, animals, plants, insects, etc...

shasei haiku is a sketch from life
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