Romance Poetry posted April 27, 2017 Chapters:  ...28 29 -30- 31... 


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...being safe in love

A chapter in the book My Book of Poems 2010-2017

A Better Place

by Mustang Patty

"Anywhere's a Better Place to Be" 
Harry Chapin, (1942-1981)

 
I search for love
Will it find me?
Hiding my heart
No way to be
 
Finding love is a long journey,
Heart on my sleeve
Here in my Better place



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Thank you helvi2 for the great artwork

The Sapphonic Triad.
This form is an invention of our own Cliverde (Carol) and named by Pantygynt (Jim).
The form is as follows:

A two-line quotation (Free verse but max total of sixteen syllables - must be concise and memorable) followed by a quatrain, four lines each of four syllables finally an 8-4-6 syllable envoi that moves us on somewhere...it should have a "satori" feeling.
You can use rhyme.

This was a challenging form to write. I was glad to have Harry's quote with me.

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