General Poetry posted February 15, 2017 Chapters:  ...20 21 -22- 23... 


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A chapter in the book Natural Light

Pleine Aire

by estory

Outside,
With brush and paint,
She works to catch
On an empty canvass
A quicksilver light
Glimmering for an instant
In wavering shadows,
Faint shapes,
Dappled colors,
Before the light
Escapes
Into thin air
And fading clouds,
Night,
All lost forever.

She thinks that quicksilver
Lends itself to the imagination,
Fills a brief moment
With incredible music
Stolen from the vibrant mosaic
Of shadows and light
In the golden leaves
Wavering for an instant
Before slipping from the hand
And eye,
Slowly disappearing,
Gone.

Only this remains:
These shadows, those shapes, that light,
Delicately frozen
In imitations of paint,
Like a rose cut from a garden,
A moment stolen,
Standing
Still.




This is a free verse piece about pleine aire painting, the act of creating something lasting out of fragile, transient moment in nature. I wanted to get a sense of the quick movements of hand and brush in the short lines, and fill the poem with images, artistic and imaginary. I got the idea for the poem after watching a pleine aire painting at Old Westbury Gardens on Long Island some years ago. estory
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