Romance Poetry posted February 7, 2017 Chapters:  ...14 15 -16- 17... 


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Origami haiku sequence

A chapter in the book Natural Light

Raindrops

by estory

That moment in time
When your voice hung in the air,
A raindrop

A raindrop music
On the leaves of the forest
Beyond us

Beyond us, moonlight
Just out of reach, beckoning
You and me

You and me, alone,
Listening in the twilight;
That moment




This is a form I developed out of the traditional 5-7-5 syllable pattern, leaving the last two syllables off to create an off balance effect, and using the last image of one stanza as the first image in the next stanza to kind of drip the images through the poem as they slowly, subtly evolve and morph, moving in a circle so that the last line of the poem echoes the first line, and it can be repeated in a never ending sequence. So this is a 5-7-3 haiku sequence poem with a romantic, ethereal feel to it. estory
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