General Fiction posted February 6, 2017

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Another girl taken


by Rhonni

A strong odor filled her nostrils as Sarah was gradually regaining consciousness, the prominent smell of diesel. Eyes wide, she could see nothing but blackness. The vibration made her nauseous and she heard the steady hum of an engine and noisy rattling coming from under where she lay.

The back of her head throbbed, her wrists and ankles bound, duct tape covered her mouth. Panicked, she began thrashing around trying to free herself. Sarah felt the car veer to the right, then make an abrupt turn, tossing her violently. The tires spit gravel, pelting the undercarriage. She had been kidnapped.

scare me writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Scare me in 100 words; give or take one. In an opening paragraph, employ the senses of sight and sound or the lack thereof, to paint your picture. No music or graphics. Artwork ok.

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