Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted December 4, 2016 Chapters:  ...4 5 -6- 

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inspired by a class discussion

A chapter in the book Homeless Series

haiku (homeless man shivers)

by Douglas Paul

homeless man shivers
as snow descends from night sky --
his only blanket

Poem of the Month contest entry


One of the concepts we covered in class is that man is a part of nature, therefore, man is an acceptable subject in Haiku. I wrote this to explore that concept, and yet, to include a traditional seasonal reference.

Opinions and suggestion always welcome - I am trying to learn this form.
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