General Fiction posted November 19, 2016

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100 word story

Step Out Of Your Prison !

by zanya

'Good day at the office', Mike hollered as Maggie closed her Ferrari door.

'Sure', Maggie murmured half-heartedly.

'We pulled it off Mags, against the odds', Mike droned on.

Maggie resented his upbeat tone.

Reaching her apartment, she collapsed on the couch and as usual, zapped the tv channels.

She dozed off.

Through her sleepy haze she could hear the measured voice,' Take a deep breath, inhale.
Within minutes, she was in sync with the man on the tv.

He continued :'Step out of your prison. Connect with your spirit'.

Maggie's ennui began to fade.

The Prisoner writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
In 100 words, or less, write a short story--not necessarily a flash-fiction, though it could be--on the theme/subject/topic of 'prisoner'. It could be literal or metaphoric.

Thanks to Regina E H-Ariel for Green Energy Healing Spirit
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