General Poetry posted November 4, 2016 |
Practice Potlatch for 11-5 - Please read notes
These Changing Leaves - Edited
by Allison78
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I've done some editing, the lines are now 10 syllables, I know I still need work on my meter and I know there are few near rhymes in there also. Thank you for any feedback!
I've done some further editing, thank you to all who helped me with this poem, I'm learning so much!
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and 2 member cents. I've done some further editing, thank you to all who helped me with this poem, I'm learning so much!
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