Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted September 6, 2016

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Who's walking whom?

nose sniffing autumn (senryu)

by Sis Cat

nose sniffing autumn
dog walks old man gripping leash
role reversal

Senryu writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a satirical senryu.
-17 syllables or less
-no artwork
-basic editor
-two color presentation (one for background, one for text)
-no videos, music or animation

This is an attempt to level the playing field.


I am ashamed to admit that my toy Chihuahua, Mina, named after a character in "Dracula," takes me on walks rather than the other way around. Thanks to her, I walked ten thousand steps today. We wrote this senryu together.

Image "Dynamism of a Dog on a Leash" by Italian Futurist painter Giacomo Balla.

Thank you for reviewing, and thank you all who voted for my poem second place in the Senryu contest. Mina and I deeply appreciate it.
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