Fantasy Poetry posted June 23, 2016

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She pleases you with

Her Passionate Pleasure

by krys123

You wait as all the candles melt.
Your fire burns just like your desires.
Her soft love's nothing you've felt,
as now it feels like spreading fires.

You smell her sweet perfume at first
'fore she even enters the place.
Your heart beats as though it will burst
as she stares with her olive face.

Her lips red as a morning rose,
glistening though their fresh as dew.
She then drifts to the fire exposed
and turns especially for you.

You feel your emotions explode
as she kneels by your trembling side,
and her velvet skin against you
as her soft hands begin to glide--

up and down your well hardened chest,
now your breathing's out of control,
thinking this has to be the best
thing, yet there's more to take its toll.

The room vibrates with love and lust
as her love moans are repeated.
The rooms air's like winds of August,
she whispers softly; "You're needed".

Flaming unrest as both hearts beat
as repetitive motions take hold.
She whispers low under the sheet
that your feet are extremely cold.


Passionate Love in Black and White writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a passionate love poem, any style, any length. Try to make us feel the heat and passion of your lovers without being vulgar or blatant. It has to be clean enough so you don't need to put any warnings on your poem.

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