General Fiction posted May 17, 2016

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100 word dash

Who is who

by rjuselius

A man with his 5-year old son browsed through the grocery store.
As the shopping was done, they proceeded to the cash register .
Before they hit the cashier, they rushed passed the candy aisle.
The boy started pulling dad's sleeve and pointing at the sweets. The father shook his head.
The child threw himself on the floor pounding his fists and crying loudly :" Sweeties!" Suddenly dad hit the floor banging his fists and legs and shouting: "But I want it!"
The boy stopped, looked at his dad, got up and completely embarrassed said: "Daddy, let's go home."

100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story in just 100 words. If so, this is your opportunity to shine. The story can be about any subject you wish, creative approaches are of course encouraged. All stories must have the following: Main Character, Setting, Conflict, Resolution.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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